i whiff you

15 Jun

up on mount royal,
it’s flat for a while.
it’s where dogs can do their gallop thing.
the 4 paw tap dance looks so gentle,
but it fuels that choo choo train rhythm
the cheku chuk
cheku chuk
cheku chuk
and all the while,
the dog’s eyes dart around in search of something.

shit…..they would rather die
than not follow their noses.

*for more on licking and whiffing,
broken bats baseball on
i must be dreaming

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3 Responses to “i whiff you”

  1. tonichristmann June 16, 2013 at 6:28 am #

    That’s a great placement for the word shit. Although, I can see other spots it might be valuable as well. Great write…. I love onomatopoeia even if it’s a made-up word. Bzzzzz…..catch ya later!

    • Steve June 16, 2013 at 8:55 pm #

      i guess it was more of a shhhhheeeeeet as in damn! them dogs keep teaching me lots.

  2. kvennarad June 18, 2013 at 6:10 am #

    Dawgs make good profs, just ask Toni.

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