it’s a good day to finish a movie

5 Sep

yesterday’s movie scene in my head is
more moon dagger reflections across water
and the camera i don’t have now rolls ashore into an abandoned beach house.
four humans emerge from a fire and walk up the hillside
is muddy.
there’s a lot of slipping but rising,
the four look down and the fire is a smoldering cherry
and so is the fear.
there are no more shadows,
just darkness and silence
filled up with shapes,
sounds they never knew to make before.


2 Responses to “it’s a good day to finish a movie”

  1. Kvennarad September 6, 2013 at 5:34 am #

    I spent a fruitful hour failing to construct a joke about archery.

    • steve September 6, 2013 at 12:30 pm #

      that’s so funny i forgot to laugh

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